The diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town.

The diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town.
This
diagram illustrates the
stages
in which an Australian town harvests
rainwater
and recycles it so that it can be safely consumed.
Overall
, the process is divided into two
stages
namely, the harvesting and the treating
stages
. The process begins with the collection of
rainwater
from multiple
houses
and concludes with drinking
water
delivered to these
houses
.
Firstly
,
rainwater
falling on the roof of numerous
houses
is collected and transferred through pipes to a drain,
this
drain gathers
rainwater
from all these
houses
and passes it through a
water
filter to remove any impurities or sediments.
After
this
,
water
moves through pipes to be stored in a tank so that it can be used later in the following
stages
. At
this
point in the process, the stored
water
is the stored
water
is transferred to a
water
treatment tank where it gets treated with chemicals to make it fit for consumption.
Finally
, the treated drinking
water
is delivered via pipes to taps in the harvesting
houses
.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words stages, rainwater, houses, water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • rainwater harvesting
  • rooftops
  • drains and gutters
  • underground storage tanks
  • water treatment plant
  • purification
  • filtration
  • chemical treatment
  • impurities
  • microorganisms
  • distribution system
  • potable water
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