The diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town.
This
diagram illustrates the stages
in which an Australian town harvests rainwater
and recycles it so that it can be safely consumed.
Overall
, the process is divided into two stages
namely, the harvesting and the treating stages
. The process begins with the collection of rainwater
from multiple houses
and concludes with drinking water
delivered to these houses
.
Firstly
, rainwater
falling on the roof of numerous houses
is collected and transferred through pipes to a drain, this
drain gathers rainwater
from all these houses
and passes it through a water
filter to remove any impurities or sediments. After
this
, water
moves through pipes to be stored in a tank so that it can be used later in the following stages
.
At this
point in the process, the stored water
is the stored water
is transferred to a water
treatment tank where it gets treated with chemicals to make it fit for consumption. Finally
, the treated drinking water
is delivered via pipes to taps in the harvesting houses
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