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The line graph shows the Population in the state of Oregon by county. Three counties that incresed in population between 1940 and 2000, Columbia, Yamhill and Washington had shown the different increasing.

The line graph shows the Population in the state of Oregon by county. Three counties that incresed in population between 1940 and 2000, Columbia, Yamhill and Washington had shown the different increasing.
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According to
 the statistics,the results have shown an increase in the
population
 of three countries including Yamhill,
columbia
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Columbia
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 and Washington.Surprisingly,they have experienced different
number
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numbers
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 of increases in their
population
 size,Which drives us to the conclusion that they have some distinct factors that have led to
this
 unexpected and differentiated outcome.
Firstly
,
Columbia
 has reported a 20% surge in its
population
 density, compared with its data of 1940.On behalf of
this
, we can summarise that
Columbia
 has failed to aware its denizens about family planning.
Consquently
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Consequently
,it led to
high
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a high
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 birth rate recorded
my
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by
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 the medical authorities of
columbia
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Columbia
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,resulting
it
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in
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 numbers surpassing the death rate of the economy. Apart
of
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from
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Columbuia
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Columbia
,Yamhill
have
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has
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 reported a sudden escalation of 15% in its
population
 data,
Analaysed
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Analysed
 by
census
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the census
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 department with its database of 1940.Talking about the results,We can perceive that the
goverment
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government
authorties
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authorities
 may be unable to impose strict laws regarding birth control.Since
,
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there are
little amendment
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few amendments
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 passed by
judiciary
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the judiciary
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 system to improvise
such
 laws.
Lastly
, The research analysts of
washington
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Washington
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has
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have
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 ended their report
while
 presenting
an
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a
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 30% increase in their citizens.Being one of the prominent states of
USA
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the USA
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,we can focus on the immigration factor for
such
increase
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an increase
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.On
the
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apply
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account of
which
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this
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,we can see the
washington
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Washington
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 state as
an
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a
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 land of
opportunties
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opportunities
 for people,Influencing them to settle their life there.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, columbia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Demographics
  • Census
  • Migration
  • Infrastructural development
  • Economic impact
  • Urbanization
  • Rural to urban shift
  • Growth rate
  • Satellite cities
  • Migration patterns
  • Local economy
  • Population density
  • Service provision
  • Housing market
  • Socioeconomic factors
  • Population spike
  • Sustainable growth
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