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The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the percentage of greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the percentage of greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
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 comparison between Australian household energy use and greenhouse gas
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 one. As demonstrated in
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,we can notice a difference between
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 graphs,
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some similarities.
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two
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 absolutely different
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 of heating,with 42
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 in Australian household energy use and only 15
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 in gas
emissions
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fewer in almost 3
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 of
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 and eight
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 of lighting in gas
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twice as much as
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 of energy. Another obvious difference we will notice is the cost of other appliances, with 15% in the first graph and 28% in the second graph, which is
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growth
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. In the meantime,there is no escaping of similarities,usage of cooling and water heating are nearly
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 in both schedules,2 and 30
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 in power consumption of Australian households,and 3 and 32 in gaseous
emissions
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Vocabulary: Replace the words two, emissions, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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