The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000.
The graphs below
illustrates
the number of men and women who are 60-64 the act of working for Change the verb form
illustrate
pray
trends in four Replace the word
prayer
countries
in 1970 and 2000.
Overall
, during this
thirty-year period, Japan
remained the biggest indicator who
Change preposition
of who
are
working,with all three other Correct subject-verb agreement
is
countries
that much less on them.
In 1970 it is clear that
the work ability
was much better, from Correct your spelling
workability
two
Correct article usage
the two
diagram
the highest index was in Change to a plural noun
diagrams
japan
with 84%, Capitalize word
Japan
while
man
aged 60-64 in Fix the agreement mistake
men
employment
Australia and Belgium they
had a strong industrial base, with significant Correct pronoun usage
apply
employment
as much as each other. However
by 2000, the gap in occupation between Add a comma
However,
this
four Correct determiner usage
these
countries
had widened and considerably a
Correct article usage
apply
liitle
more was Correct your spelling
little
employment
status in Japan
and USA.
As can be seen from the second diagram, the amount of employment
much
less in double than Add a missing verb
is much
first
, Correct article usage
the first
also
the highest indicator is 43% and increased in all four countries
but rose dramatically in Japan
again. The period between 1970 and 2000 show
a different growth and in 2000 the people who have a job from Correct subject-verb agreement
shows
two
charts as they less than in 1970.Correct article usage
the two
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