The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate.
the
two
pie charts illustrates
the outcome of a survey of Change the verb form
illustrate
boys
and girls activities
.
Overall
, the two
sexes are
enjoyed Unnecessary verb
apply
listening
the music Add the preposition
listening to
in
the same level. Change preposition
on
However
, dramatically
larger number of girls like reading. And show the many differences Correct article usage
a dramatically
of
sport preferring.
Turning to the first chart, there given the information that the Change preposition
in
boys
almost prefer computer games than
Change preposition
to
the
other Correct article usage
apply
activities
. Playing basketball coming to
the second most popular leisure, played by almost Verb problem
is
third
of Correct article usage
a third
boys
.after the
basketball followed Correct article usage
apply
the
soccer leisure Correct article usage
apply
that
played by 17%. there Correct pronoun usage
apply
have
3 different types of Verb problem
are
activities
that placed
in the Add a missing verb
are placed
less
grades they are skateboarding 11%, listening to music 10% and reading 3%.
In the second pie chart given the Fix the agreement mistake
lower
two
highest scores except
the other mentioned Add the preposition
except for
activities
. they are dancing and reading. Dancing receive the
third of Correct article usage
a
a girls
, Correct the article-noun agreement
girls
a girl
also
reading is a little bit less is
a 21%. Unnecessary verb
apply
Although
, Correct word choice
However
percentage
of female children who play Correct article usage
the percentage
the
computer games is roughly less than that of Correct article usage
apply
boys
16%. And the remaining two
activities
with the lowest percentage are listening to music and netball.Submitted by dnm.best on
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