The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of people in Uk in 2004
The line graph the amount of consumption
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three categories among Change preposition
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five different age groups in the United Kingdom in 2004.
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Overall
, during this
year period, people who are older 76
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than 76
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remained the biggest spenders on Change to a plural noun
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food
and drink
, with all two other indicator
spending much less on them.
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restourant
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restaurants
hotel
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hotels
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who
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do as
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highest index is Correct article usage
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food
and drink
with 13%. However
, from 61 to 75 their
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fell sharply to 13%. The gap Correct your spelling
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in food
drink
in
spending between these three statements had widened and considerably more money with spent in 76 and more.
As can be seen from the graph, the lowest detector is restaurant and hotel in 61-75 with 2% the highest pointer is entertainment and Change preposition
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food
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