The diagram shows the relationship between a numbers of different languages. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows the relationship between a numbers of different languages. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the relationships between various languages.
English
represented
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as a root node of the tree, after that, it divides into
American
and
British
branches, and
at the end
of the
process
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process,
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the regions that speak these languages
mentioned
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are mentioned
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.
The
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American
English
is used in the USA and Canada,
nevertheless
the
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British
English
has 6 forks.
Innitially
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Initially
, we can see the division
also
by world map regions; the
American
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Americans
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originally applied in the
West
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western
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hemisphere, rather than
British
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the British
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in the East. In fact, most
part
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parts
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of the
American speaking
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American-speaking
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areas are situated in the continent, and only Philipines are atypical and located on the islands,
whereas
the second language group presents in both:
archipelagos
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the archipelagos
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and
mainlads
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mainlands
. In brief,
due to
the illustration the spreading of
the
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British
English
is higher and covers 4 continents
as well as
multiple islands,
although
the
American
language
popular
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is popular
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only in 1 continent and a small number of isles.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words english, american, british with synonyms.

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