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The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts illustrate the reasons behind students' studying of five different
age
 brackets and how much
support
 employers offered them.
Overall
,
it is clear that
while
 the younger
age
groups
 pursue studying to achieve their career aims, that for the oldest group is to please themselves.
In addition
, the lowest
age
groups
 received the highest
support
. A great tendency towards studying in favour of their career is noticeable in the three first
age
groups
 (under 26, 26-29 and, 30-39) with 80%, 70%, and almost 60% of their population doing so, respectively. Meanwhile, half of those aged 40-49 studied out of interest and half for their professional prospects. In comparison, the oldest
age
bracked
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bracket
 saw a different picture with the majority of them studying for their interest at approximately 70%. In terms of the
support
 they received, it was the highest in
two
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the two
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 youngest
age
groups
 at nearly 70% for the former and 60% for the latter.
Moreover
, those in the 30-39 and 40-49
groups
 got somewhat similar levels of
support
 from 30% to 40%.
In contrast
, the highest
age
 bracket was provided with slightly more
support
 with just above 40%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, support, groups with synonyms.
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