In the future,people may no longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash.All payments may have to be made by card or using phones. Do you thibk this will happen one day? Why do you think some people might not be happy to give up using cash?
Nowadays,mobile phones play a pivotal role in
individual's
life as it becomes immensely great for Correct article usage
an individual's
payment
and other financial services.According to
this
situation,i
think that it will remove Change the capitalization
I
cash
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the cash
payment
method very soon while
some people might not be Correct word choice
apply
joyous
with it.In Correct word choice
happy
this
essay,i
will discuss Change the capitalization
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reasons
behind it and Correct article usage
the reasons
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the disatisfaction
disatisfaction
of some individuals towards Correct your spelling
dissatisfaction
this
situation.
Firstly
,every shops
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shop
have
a digital Correct subject-verb agreement
has
payment
method which allows everyone to pay cashless in case of emergency when they do not carry cash
with them.Secondly
,there is no fear of robbery in card payment
,individual can shops
easily without brooding about Change the verb form
shop
Add an article
the thief
a thief
thief
.Fix the agreement mistake
thieves
For instance
,google pay
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Google Pay
becomes
a significant app for everyone, whenever they go outside they don't have to think about carrying Wrong verb form
has become
cash
.Lastly
,it has been proven beneficial not only consumers
but Change preposition
for consumers
also
for shopkeepers as they do not have to count cash
and payment
will credit
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be credited
in
their bank account directly.
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to
However
,some people might not be feel
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feel
charm
as they think it has some negative impacts as well.Replace the word
charmed
Acording
to them, paying Correct your spelling
According
cash
is better
way Add an article
a better
the better
for shopping
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to shop
and
it will Correct word choice
but
also
have some demerits such
as one can became
spendthrift as they can not feel the real Wrong verb form
becoming
payment
while
using Correct article usage
a cards
cards
payments.Change the noun form
card
Moreover
,they also
have phobia
of becoming Add an article
a phobia
victim
and fraud Fix the agreement mistake
victims
while
doing online transactions.For example
,some people have became
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become
victim
Fix the agreement mistake
victims
about
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of
robbery
of Add an article
the robbery
a robbery
hefty
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a hefty
amount
from their Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
account
.
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accounts
To sum up
this
, every coin has two sides,these both have their own merits and demerits.But, drawbacks are negligible and one can use cards as it
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they
proves
safe,fast and reliable for Correct subject-verb agreement
prove
payment
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Grammar
Work on sentence structure and grammar. There are numerous minor grammatical errors which detract from the overall clarity of the essay.
Task Response
ELaborate on main points with more specific examples and detailed explanations. This will provide better support for your arguments.
Task Achievement
The essay covers both sides of the argument, discussing the benefits of cashless payments and the concerns surrounding them.
Coherence and Cohesion
There is a clear introduction and conclusion, which helps to frame the discussion effectively.