Use the information and language from this lesson to answer this Writing Part 1 task. The chart below gives information about how people aged 25-34 are housed in the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on the main features,Do not give your opinion, just the facts and make comparisons where relevant.

Nowadays,

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prefer a fast and more convenient lifestyle mostly

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their work requirements.

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bar chart is

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proof that working or

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can make a big impact on how

people

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prefer their living

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methods

. The bar chart revealed significant shifts in homeownership and renting trends among

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aged 25-34 in the UK between 2004 and 2014. Notably, the

percentage

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of

homeowners

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decreased

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the

percentage

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of

renters

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increased. Over the decade, the

percentage

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of

homeowners

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among

people

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aged 25-34 decreased,

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the

percentage

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of

renters

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increased.

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shift was so significant that by the end of the period,

renters

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had surpassed

homeowners

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. The homeownership

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was approximately 58% in 2004, which was about 30% higher than the

rate

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for

renters

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.

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rate

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dipped slightly to about 56% in 2006

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and

then

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increased to 57% in 2007.

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, the

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then

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dropped significantly to almost 52% in 2011

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and remained almost the same in 2012.

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, it continued to decline steadily to about 36% by the end of the period. In 2004, about 20% of

people

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were renting, and

this

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increased to around 33% in 2005 before remaining consistent in 2006.

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, over the next five years, the figure experienced significant steady growth, reaching around 41% in 2011. It remained stable in 2012 and

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surged to 47% in 2014, surpassing the

rate

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of

homeowners

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.