The charts below show the proportions of the global TV market in terms of sales revenue in 2010 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the proportions of the global TV market in terms of sales revenue in 2010 and 2020. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two pie charts provide information about the percentages of six international TV markets in terms of
sales
generated in the years 2010 and 2020. Units are measured in percentages.
Overall
, there was an upward trend in TCL, Hisense, and Vizio,
while
LG experienced a downtrend. Despite
this
, there were no changes in the revenue generated by Sony in
both
years. In 2010, the
sales
revenue by TCL saw a relative increase from 30% to 35% in 2020. But it was still the highest for
both
2010 and 2020. A similar trend was seen for
both
Hisense and Vizio which increased by 5%.
However
, the percentage of income generated by LG declined by a tenth in 2020 from 20% in 2010. There were no fluctuations in the
sales
revenue of Sony. For
both
years, the percentages were 10%.
However
, the income of LG, Samsung, and Sony combined which is around 30% could not surpass the
sales
of TCL.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, both with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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