The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams depict the
statistic
about the distribution of locations that are used for dancing Fix the agreement mistake
statistics
classes
in one of the towns in Australia and the number of students that participate in various types of Use synonyms
its
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apply
classes
, categorized based on their age group.
The most used location for Use synonyms
classes
is the private studios which percentage is 48%. It is followed by the other three locations which are far left behind, including 24% at school halls, 18% at community halls and Use synonyms
others area
, and 10% at college-base studios.
Ballet has the highest number of Fix the agreement mistake
other areas
participations
with approximately 600 participants under 11 years old, and 300 teenagers Correct your spelling
participants
at
the age range 11 to 16. Meanwhile, Tap Change preposition
in
dance
Use synonyms
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classes'
participants are above 400 for every age group. Change noun form
classes
Lastly
, Modern Linking Words
dance
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classes
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has
the greatest number of attendances at 500, with the major participants Change the verb form
have
are
teenagers and 300 children.
Wrong verb form
being
To conclude
, most Linking Words
dance
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classes
use private studios, with Ballet has become the most popular Use synonyms
dancing
class followed by Modern Replace the word
dance
dance
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words classes, dance with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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