The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.
The bar chart illustrates some changes in the proportion of residents born in
Australia
and inhabitants born in foreign living in urban, the countryside, and towns
from 1995 to 2010.
In general, people
in cities tended to increase over time. Meanwhile, the population in two areas such
as the countryside and towns
decreased.
Having looked at the given picture for more details, in 1995, the number of city dwellers born in Australia
accounted for 50, lower than people
born outside by 10. Besides
, the number of humans abroad in towns
was 40, more than domestic people
by nearly 7. By contrast
, the figure for rural people
in Australia
was 20, half more than residents abroad.
In 2010, the two rates of people
in Australia
and inhabitants in foreign went down, but the rate of domestic humans in towns
and the countryside was more than external people
by 3 and 4, respectively. In addition
, although
the domestic people
's percentage and external inhabitants's percentage in megacities increased, the rate of people
born outside Australia
was overweight.Submitted by ieltswritingpracticedl on
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