The graphs below show the percentage of men and women aged 60-64 who were employed in four counthies in 1970 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The bar diagram compares the proportions of employed males and
females
in Belgium
, USA, Japan
and Australia in the age category 60-64 years in 1970 and 2000. Overall
it is immediately apparent thathat
more males than Correct your spelling
that hat
that
females
were employed in this
age group in the two different years.
Looking at the male group, the number of men who worked in 1970 decreased by 2000 in all four countries. Japan
had the highest percentage of working males at 85% in 1970. This
was followed by 79% in Belgium
. Meanwhile, in 2000, Japan
witnessed a little less than 10
% drop but Correct article usage
a 10
Belgium
by contrast
saw a dramatic reduction by
60%. USA and Australia Change preposition
of
on the other hand
, made insignificant decreases of 18% and 28% respectively from 1970 to 2000.
Turning to the females
, whilst Japan
recorded the highest percentage of women with jobs, Belgium
, however
, had the least
number of working Correct word choice
lowest
females
in the two different years. Also
, notably
among the women is the 3% and 2% increase in employment rates made in the USA and Australia respectively from 1970 to 2000.Change the word
notable
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