You have a full time job and also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to the course tuttor. In your letter Describe the situation Explain why you cannot continue at this time Say what action you would like to take

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Dear
tuttor
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tutor
, How are you ? I hope you are fine.
I'am
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I am
your student and
i'am
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I am
writing
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have a problem and
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find
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cannot continue the
course
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Firstly
, I'm a student in your English
course
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British
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council
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. I have class every Wednesday and Thursday
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20 h pm. I have passed 3 weeks in
this
course
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, I'm a worker
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in a commercial firm.
Secondly
, in the next 4 months ,
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will work supplementary hours
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the class
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will have a trip
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Canada. For these reasons ,
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cannot continue the
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have
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the fee
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the
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need your help
tuttor
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tutor
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resolve
this
problem. In fact,
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hope your help to
convaincre
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convince
the administration of the school to program the
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rest
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the next January 2025. I present to the administration all papers
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my engagement with my company. Thank you sir for your
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and
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wait your response
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sincerely
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coherence cohesion
Organize the letter into clear paragraphs, each focusing on a single idea. For instance, one paragraph for describing the situation, another for explaining why you cannot continue, and a final one for the action you would like to take.
coherence cohesion
Ensure your ideas are logically structured. While you have included all necessary information, it's essential to present it in a more organized manner.
coherence cohesion
Be more formal with your greeting and closing. Instead of "tuttor" use "Dear Tutor" and "Yours sincerely." Additionally, avoid casual expressions like "How are you? I hope you are fine."
task achievement
Address the tutor by their name if possible and avoid starting sentences with "And". Use formal expressions such as "I am unable to continue the course due to..." instead of "I have a problem."
task achievement
Review and correct small grammatical errors, such as capitalization mistakes (e.g., "British council" should be "British Council") and verb usage (e.g., "convaincre" should be "convince").
task achievement
You clearly mention the issue and provide specific details about the course and your job circumstances, which is good for task achievement.
task achievement
You express your need for the tutor's help convincingly and provide a reasonable request.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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