WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The two graphs show the main sources of energy in the USA in the 1980s and the 1990s. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make Write at least 150 words.

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The two graphs show the main sources of energy in the USA in the 1980s and the 1990s.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make 

Write at least 150 words.
The pie charts provide key information about the basic sources of sources of energy in the United States of America in the 1980s and the 1990s. The units are measured in percentage.
Overall
, it is clear from the graphs that oil had the largest proportion that
considered
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the first and foremost source of energy in both decades.
In addition
, the nuclear
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doubled from 5% in 1980 to 10% in 1990,
Whereas
the hydroelectric power remained the same over the years.
According to
what is shown, in
natural
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the natural
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gas field there was a
slightly
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drop from 26% in 1980 to 25% in 1990.
In contrast
, the coal grew from 22 per cent to 27 per cent. In terms of the lowest amount of energy used over the period
that is
hydroelectric power obviously.
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