WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make Write at least 150 words.
The diagram provides Key information about the process of manufacturing the
intant
noodles. Correct your spelling
instant
overall
, it is clear from the d'agram
that the Correct your spelling
diagram
proy
under goes eight phases. Correct your spelling
proxy
In addition
, the first six stages indude
storage, mixingCorrect your spelling
include
and
, doughing and cooking steps, Correct word choice
apply
whereas
the of
Change preposition
apply
last
three stages pantain
the Correct your spelling
plantain
contain
preparing
and labelling Replace the word
preparation
the
end prido end Change preposition
of the
products
.
Fix the agreement mistake
product
According to
what is shown, firstly
, the flour is put bein linside
Correct your spelling
inside
lineside
storge
silos. Correct your spelling
storage
Secondly
, Seco it moved into the mixer to apply water and oil. Following that, the mixture transformed to
rollers where Change preposition
into
dough
shuts. Correct article usage
the dough
Subsequently
, the stage of daugh strips took place After that, the noodles discs is
made. Change the verb form
are
Next,
the Stage of cooking oil and drying.
In terms of final
three stages, it Correct article usage
the final
Correct your spelling
mixed
mixes
mixede
with vegetables and spices in cups Add a missing verb
is mixede
Finally
labeling
and sealing the end productsChange the spelling
labelling
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