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WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make Write at least 150 words.

WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make Write at least 150 words.
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The diagram provides Key information about the process of manufacturing the
intant
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instant
 noodles.
overall
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, it is clear from the
d'agram
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diagram
 that the
proy
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proxy
 under goes eight phases.
In addition
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, the first six stages
indude
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include
 storage, mixing
and
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apply
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, doughing and cooking steps,
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 the
of
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last
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 three stages
pantain
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plantain
contain
 the
preparing
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 and labelling
the
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 end prido end
products
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product
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.
According to
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 what is shown,
firstly
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, the flour is put bein
linside
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inside
lineside
storge
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 silos.
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, Seco it moved into the mixer to apply water and oil. Following that, the mixture transformed
to
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 rollers where
dough
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the dough
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 shuts.
Subsequently
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, the stage of daugh strips took place After that, the noodles discs
is
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 made.
Next,
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the Stage of cooking oil and drying. In terms of
final
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the final
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 three stages, it
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mixed
mixes
mixede
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is mixede
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 with vegetables and spices in cups
Finally
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labeling
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labelling
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 and sealing the end products
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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