WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make Write at least 150 words.
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The pie chart and the table provide key information about Anthropology graduates' destinations after
graduatian
from one university.
Correct your spelling
graduation
graduating
overall
, it is clear from the chart that full-time work
has the highest proportion of the destination. In addition
, the government sector has the largest percentage of the salary after five years of work
reaching its peak over
100 thousand Change preposition
of over
doller
. Correct your spelling
dollars
dollar
According to
what is shown, the first and foremost destination for the graduates was full-time work
. Secondly
, part-time work
and unemployed come in the order at 15%, and 12%, respectively. Following that, full-time postgrad study and not known have the same proportion at 8%. Finally
, the lowest amount was for part time
Add a hyphen
part-time
work
and postgrad study.
In terms of salaries, the highest was for government
sector, Add an article
the government
next,
freelance consultants at 40 per cent. Finally
, the private companies have the lowest salary after five years of wark
at 30%.Correct your spelling
work
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words work with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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