The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The given line graph illustrates the amounts of Australian transport to overseas with four countries
in particular
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years
. Use synonyms
Overall
, all four countries witnessed fluctuating Linking Words
Use synonyms
trend
in the given time period. Fix the agreement mistake
trends
Additionally
, Japan and the US decreased compared to the first year Linking Words
while
China and India increased.
First and Linking Words
above all
, China had an upward Linking Words
trend
for all Use synonyms
years
and started at approximately 5% in 1990 and increased significantly and reached just under 30% in 2012. India witnessed a stable Use synonyms
trend
in the first ten Use synonyms
years
Use synonyms
and
increased significantly and picked up nearly 10% in 2010 and declined exactly 5% in 2012.
Correct word choice
which
On the other hand
, Japan had a downward Linking Words
trend
in the entire time period. It started at just over 25% and noticeably decreased until 2010 Use synonyms
and
unchanged between 2010 and 2012 and stayed at just over 15%. Correct word choice
apply
Nevertheless
, the percentage of exports to the US fluctuated in all Linking Words
years
. It started with a decrease and increased from 1995 to 2000 and Use synonyms
then
again declined until 2010 at exactly 5% and slightly rose and reached just over 5% in 2012.Linking Words
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