The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The given line graph illustrates the amounts of Australian transport to overseas with four countries
in particular
years
.
Overall
, all four countries witnessed fluctuating
trend
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in the given time period.
Additionally
, Japan and the US decreased compared to the first year
while
China and India increased. First and
above all
, China had an upward
trend
for all
years
and started at approximately 5% in 1990 and increased significantly and reached just under 30% in 2012. India witnessed a stable
trend
in the first ten
years
and
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increased significantly and picked up nearly 10% in 2010 and declined exactly 5% in 2012.
On the other hand
, Japan had a downward
trend
in the entire time period. It started at just over 25% and noticeably decreased until 2010
and
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unchanged between 2010 and 2012 and stayed at just over 15%.
Nevertheless
, the percentage of exports to the US fluctuated in all
years
. It started with a decrease and increased from 1995 to 2000 and
then
again declined until 2010 at exactly 5% and slightly rose and reached just over 5% in 2012.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, trend with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.

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