The bar chart illustrates the proportion of people who consumed five portions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK over 8 years, which is from 2001 to 2008.

The bar chart illustrates the proportion of people who consumed five portions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK over 8 years, which is from 2001 to 2008.
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The bar graph compares data about the percentage of 3 different types of people (Men, Women, and Children) who used 5 portions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.
Overall
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, Women used fruit and vegetables more than other people;
moreover
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, the figure of kids and men who ate these foods increased in the period of 8 years.
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the diagram, the first group who used a large section of fruit and vegetables were females because at the beginning of 2001, had 21%;
then
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this
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plot moderately rose, and reached the peak in 2006 at 35%;
however
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,
this
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trend reduced to 30% in 2008, equal to the number of in 2004. Men, who were the
second,
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between 2001 and 2003, were stable at 18%. Later climbed slightly to 28%, and approximately stabilized in
finally
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3 years. The chart shows children in the 3first years did not have any change and had a 12% after that grew up to 27% in 2007, which was touched the maximum, but as the same as females fell to 26% in 2008.
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