Food travels thousands of miles from farm to consumers. Some people believe we should buy food from the local farmer to protect the environment and support local businesses. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
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We consume
food
which had
traveled more distance. Some individuals state that we should purchase Wrong verb form
has
food
from local markets inorder
to protect the environment Correct your spelling
in order
as well as
to support the neighborhood
Change the spelling
neighbourhood
farmers
. I believe the advantages such
as,
having access to fresh Remove the comma
apply
food
and less pricy food
outweigh the disadvantages such
as the only availability
of seasonal food
and the availability
of the seller.
Consuming foods from a local market always depend
on the Change the verb form
depends
availability
of the seller. Local farmers
are not always present and then
usually make their sales on weekends. This
generates such
difficulties to
the buyer as they can not buy the products whenever they need to. Change preposition
for
Also
another problem is that the regional markets only contain seasonal fruits and vegetables which are grown in the neighborhood. So the Add a comma
Also,
consumer
doesnt
get Correct your spelling
doesn't
an
access to Remove the article
apply
enjoy
various types of foods. Verb problem
apply
For example
, apples and oranges do not grow in tropical countries like Srilanka
. So unless they are imported, the people in Correct your spelling
Sri Lanka
Srilanka
Correct your spelling
Sri Lanka
wont
be able to taste them.
Add an apostrophe
won't
However
, a major advantage is that the local markets almost always have fresh items. Farmers
are keen on selling their freshly produced fruits, vegetables or meat in the market in order to gain more trust of the consumer
and satisfy them with their service. Moreover
, since these items meet the consumer
directly, the cost for
travelling and taxes for those are not applicable, Change preposition
of
thus
, they tend to cost much less. For instance
, the price of fish meat is significantly low and in
high quality in coastal areas.
In conclusion, as products travel way more distance to reach the Change preposition
of
consumer
, it is believed that buying more from local farmers
have
many advantages Correct subject-verb agreement
has
such
as having access to fresh and cheap priced food
and they surpass the disadvantages such
as the only availability
of seasonal food
and the limited presence of local farmers
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