In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In some countries, old

parents

stays

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stay

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in

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at

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home

with other old people. In

same

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the same

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case, the government has to pay for

this

care. For me, the

fee

of the

live

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life

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of old

parents

is

payed

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paid

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by the

member

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members

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of their family.

Firstly

, the

live

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lives

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of

this

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these

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old

parents

is

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are

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concentrate

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concentrated

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for

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on

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their

children's

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children

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. In fact, the

children

have

important

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an important

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role in

payment

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the payment

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of the

fee

of

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for

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the

live

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lives

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of their old

parent's

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parents

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.

In

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On

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other

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the other

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hand, the

old

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older

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parents

have saved

money

in the

last

years.

This

money

serve

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serves

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to pay the

fee

of

retirement

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a retirement

the retirement

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home

.

Moreover

, in some

case

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cases

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,

save

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saving

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money

is

low

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lower

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than the

fee

and their

children's

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children

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can't

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don't

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have much

money

to pay

this

fee

.

Than

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Then

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, the government help these families to pay.

For example

: make a monthly salary for

this

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these

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old

parents

,

payement

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payment

a

percent

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per cent

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of

this

fee

or propose a special subvention to

retirement

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a retirement

the retirement

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home

. In conclusion, it is important to make

this

payement

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payment

of

fee

older

parents

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parents'

parent's

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home

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homes

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essential and important affair

by

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for

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the

children

. But, in urgent and special

case

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cases

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, the government need to help these families.