Writing task 1 The graph below shows the percentage of river water in the UK that is of good chemical quality, in the period between 1990 and 2002.

Writing task 1 

The graph below shows the percentage of river water in the UK that is of good chemical quality, in the period between 1990 and 2002.
The line chart Illustrates the proportion of magazines purchased by authors between 1999 and 2002 in four countries in Europe.
Overall
,
Belgium
and
France
witnessed the same increase in 2002. Germany
appeared
Verb problem
had
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the largest percentage in 1999 after steadily decreasing as Halland.
Belgium
shows the largest fluctuations from the lowest in 1999 before steadily increasing in
further
years. Both
Belgium
and
France
were at the same percentage in 2002,
France
was steadily increasing from above 4% in 1999 to 5% in 2002 to represent one of the largest percentages.
Belgium
witnessed a dramatic increase from being the lowest at just under 2% in 1999,
then
started to steadily
increasing
Wrong verb form
increase
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to 5% in 2002, the same percentage as
France
. Germany dramatically went down
after
Change preposition
from
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having the highest just above 4% in 1999, to steadily
went
Wrong verb form
going
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under 3% in 2002. Holland had a little fluctuation starting with 3% in 1999, increasing above 3%,
then
being steady in 2001 and 2002 with just 3%.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words belgium, france with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.

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