The table shows the percentage of journeys made by different forms of transport in four countries. The bar graph shows the results of a survey into car use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the
percentage
of journeys made by various forms of transport
in four countries while
the bar chart demonstrates the findings of a survey into car
use.
Overall
, Although
Canada
had the highest percentage
on
Change preposition
of
the
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apply
car
usage
, it had very
low Add an article
a very
percentage
in
public means Change preposition
of
whereas
Germany
used public transport
the most. However
, Netherlands
had low Correct article usage
the Netherlands
usage
of cars as compared to the other states because they mostly used bicycles. Further
, Germany
and Belgium had equal percentage
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percentages
on
both bicycle Change preposition
of
usage
and by
foot. Change preposition
apply
On
other means, all had equal Change preposition
By
number
apart from Fix the agreement mistake
numbers
Germany
. In Canada
, most people used the cars because they had no any
other alternative and less Correct quantifier usage
apply
percentage
due to
their attendance of night shift work.
Nonetheless
, Canada
led in car
usage
with 90% but only few
people Change the article
a few
that is
3% used public means. In Germany
public transportation was highly used Add a comma
Germany,
18
%. Change preposition
by 18
Although
Netherlands
had low Correct article usage
the Netherlands
car
usage
47%, they had a high number of 26% in bicycle use. Germany
and Belgium had equal percent
Replace the word
percentages
on
bicycle use Change preposition
of
as well as
using foot as a means of transport
. Those who used other types of transport
all
the three countries had 1% apart from Change preposition
in all
Germany
that had which had 3%. In Canada
, the survey showed that cars were used the most 38 percent
because people had no Change the spelling
per cent
any
other option and only 18% Correct quantifier usage
apply
was
used by those who worked on the night shift.Correct subject-verb agreement
were
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