The given graph shows the past and projected figures of the government spending as a percentage of GDP for the years 2000 to 2025 in three areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The given graph shows the past and projected figures of the government spending as a percentage of GDP for the years 2000 to 2025 in three areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the numbers in percentages of GDP government expenditure on health, education and road and railways from 2000 to 2025.
Overall
,
on
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schooling, it is expected to reduce
the
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expenses by
year
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2025. On health
usage
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it will continue to increase
whereas
on roads and rails, it will first fluctuate and later by
year
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2025 begin to reduce.
Nonetheless
, the government utilization of funds on education in 2000 was 5.0%.
This
figure continued to rise and by
year
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2010 it started to reduce and is predicted by 2025 it will have a sharp fall.
However
, in 2000, they spent almost 4.1% on
health related
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issues and it has continued to increase steadily
this
expenditure with a
believe
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that even in 2025 they will continue spending more on the latter.
Also
, on roads and railways, the expenditure fluctuated throughout the years and it
predicted
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it will continue to show a downfall of below 4 per cent in future.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reduce" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuate" was used 2 times.
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