There have been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive. Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, describe the complaints that have been made say why the reception area is important suggest how the reception area could be improved
Dear Mr Jane
I'm John from enough people to
reception
part . Unfortunately , Correct article usage
the reception
i
have had an issue with Change the capitalization
I
reception
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the reception
area
. we didn'tAdd a missing verb
have
service
for 20 vistor
Correct your spelling
visitors
last
day . And the reception
areas didn't have enough chair
and Fix the agreement mistake
chairs
sofa
in there .
Correct article usage
a sofa
the Customer
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The customer
quite
angry and Add a missing verb
is quite
uncomfy
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uncomfortable
for
Change preposition
with
this
service
.
I maintain that reception
are
very important simply because it's my Change the verb form
is
hotel'
face . I Change noun form
hotel's
belive
you know that Correct your spelling
believe
,
the visitor will remember the Remove the comma
apply
kindly
and gentle Change the word
kind
receptioner
and they will Correct your spelling
reception
comback
.
So from my point of view , the Correct your spelling
comeback
come back
reception
area
need
2 people more to good Change the verb form
needs
service
. Beside
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Besides
that
we need some Add a comma
that,
equiment sush
as chairs, tables, or some massage machines for the visitors when they waiting .
It's be great if have some Correct your spelling
equipment such
desert
or lemon juice for Correct your spelling
dessert
service
. I sure
that the visitors don't have any Add a missing verb
am sure
complains
Replace the word
complaints
for
Change preposition
about
reception
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the reception
area
anymore .
I'm looking forward to hearing some ideal
from you .
Best regards
Mr John from Correct your spelling
ideas
Reception
Correct article usage
the Reception
area
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grammar
Make sure to proofread for grammatical errors and improve sentence structure for clarity and correctness. For example, instead of 'I maintain that reception are very important,' it should be 'I believe that the reception area is very important.'
task achievement
Consider elaborating on the complaints a bit more to fully articulate the issues. For example, you can include specific visitor feedback to make your point stronger.
task achievement
You have successfully mentioned each required component: describing the complaints, stating the importance of the reception area, and suggesting improvements.
suitable writing tone
Your tone is appropriate for a professional letter, and you have included a polite greeting and closing.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.