A friend is considering buying a house nearby, but you have decided to leave the area due to a rise in crime. Write a letter to your friend advising them not to move into the neighbourhood. In your letter: – Recommend that your friend not go ahead with the purchase – Give the reasons behind your decision to leave – Suggest possible alternative areas that you know

Dear sunny, Hope you are doing well. I am
writting
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letter regarding
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dont
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don't
buy
house
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near me. I am sending you one
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and checked
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place. Hi dear I am very happy for you, Because
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10 years
not
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easy
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for you, every day
u
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hard work now see
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successful
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think
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buying
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the home near me. I
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the advice
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area is not good for now. Every day crime levels
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up and
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safe for families. I decide to leave that house and move to
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side 50
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from here. I suggest
buy
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the new property there. I am searching about that area, new buildup all
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Shoping
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, gym, and big reason police station near
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. So I recommend please invest the money
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, Tilak Raj.
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task achievement
Ensure to provide a more detailed and structured explanation for why you advise against the purchase. This will improve task achievement.
task achievement
Maintain a consistent writing tone throughout the letter. Avoid abrupt changes in tone and make sure it remains formal but friendly.
coherence cohesion
Organize the letter into clear paragraphs, each addressing a specific point (e.g., reasons for not buying, reasons for leaving, alternative suggestions). This will enhance logical structure and coherence.
coherence cohesion
Use more varied and accurate vocabulary, and make sure you correct grammatical and spelling errors.
task achievement
The writer clearly mentions the concern about rising crime and suggests an alternative area.
coherence cohesion
The letter has an appropriate greeting and closing.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • reconsider
  • unfortunate
  • incidents
  • safety concerns
  • deteriorating
  • neighborhood
  • increase in crime
  • personal experience
  • unsafe environment
  • alternatives
  • lower crime rates
  • amenities
  • community-oriented
  • recommend
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