The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two maps depict the comparison of
Norbiton
place
before the renovation and the development plan after construction. Capitalize word
Place
Overall
, the existing of
industrial Change preposition
apply
area
of Norbiton
will be rebuilt to be residential and public facilities.
The first picture shows the current map of Norbiton
industrial region Correct article usage
the Norbiton
in
the east Change preposition
on
side
of the city. In
the north Change preposition
On
side
of the Norbiton
, there is an extensive river that separates between the industrial district and farmland. In the center
of Change the spelling
centre
Norbiton
zone, there is a roundabout and factories on the Correct article usage
the Norbiton
side
of the road
. There are two branch roads from the center
, to the east which connects to another factory Change the spelling
centre
area
, and to the south side
area
that directs to the main road
in the south of the map.
The second picture illustrates the design of Norbiton
residential Correct article usage
the Norbiton
neighborhood
. There will be significant development in the centre path, which are new roundabout on the south Change the spelling
neighbourhood
side
of the existing circle road
, and additional roads on the north and east of the ongoing roundabout. From the small circle road
, if we go to the north side
, there will be medical
centre Correct article usage
a medical
in
the right Change preposition
on
side
and shops in
the left Change preposition
on
side
. There will be a Northwest road
that leads to housing
Add an article
the housing
area
. On the south side
of Big Circle Road
, there are
another housing Correct subject-verb agreement
is
area
, school, and playground facilities. On the north, there is housing on the left side
and if we go through, the road
will continue across the river and lead to a new housing area
in the middle of the farmland.
In conclusion, the Norbiton
area
will be changing from a factory area
to be residential area
and its facilities.Submitted by yxxs on
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