The diagrams below give information about the Eiffel Tower in Paris and an outline project to extend it underground. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown.
The diagram illustrates the
Eiffel
Tower
in Paris and an explanation of a project to enlarge the tower
.
The most noticeable change from the diagram is that Eiffel
Towel will be higher with many facilities.
Looking at the details, the Correct article usage
the Eiffel
Eiffel
tower
is located in Paris near the Seine River and it is behind the Ecolo military. There are many buildings near Paris city Capitalize word
Tower
such
as hotel
, Fix the agreement mistake
hotels
Museum
and Fix the agreement mistake
museums
plaza
.
Conservely,Fix the agreement mistake
plazas
this
Eiffel
Tower
made of metal had 10.000 tons weight and 324 meters height
Change preposition
in height
which
was completed with two platforms which have 57 and Correct pronoun usage
it
the
115 meters high from the ground and both platforms can be related by 1665 stairs. Regarding the outline project, inside of the Correct article usage
apply
Eiffel
Tower
, two lift
will be added on the left and right side. Fix the agreement mistake
lifts
Next,
there will be on
5 underground levels where the ticket office and access to the Change preposition
apply
tower
is
on the first level and Change the verb form
are
shop
and restaurants are on the second Fix the agreement mistake
shops
floors
. Fix the agreement mistake
floor
Finally
, there are cinema and museum on the third levels
and Fix the agreement mistake
level
Correct your spelling
the
thr
fourth and fifth floors will be meant for parking a lotsCorrect your spelling
the
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words eiffel, tower with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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