The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The
bie
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pie
charts give information
of
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the percentage of
using
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water
in
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multiple
reason
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in six
part
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of the world .
Overall
, using
water
for farming is the most
comon
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common
in
the
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all areas
expect
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except
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North
America
and
Europe
. industrial
use
and domestic
use
is the least
use
of
water
, but North
America
and
Europe
have the most
use
of
water
in industrial
use
.
Farmars
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Farmers
are using the highest amount of
water
in Africa, Central
Asia
and South East
Asia
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84%, 88% and 81%
respctfally
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respectfully
.
However
, 7% of domestic
use
of
water
in Central
Asia
and South East
Asia
as
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the lowest, but
Aferca
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Africa
has more
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% than them. in industrial
use
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South East
Asia
has
most
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use
of
water
among Africa and Central
Asia
by
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12%,
while
7%
use
in Africa and 5% in Central
Asia
.
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Europe
has the most
use
of
water
in industrial
use
by
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53% and North
Amercia
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America
are second
by
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48%.
However
,
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agricultural
use
of
water
in
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North
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America
and
Europe
were
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39% and 32%
respctfally
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respectively
.
Europe
has the second
bigest
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use
of domestic of all areas
by
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15% after South
America
,
while
North
America
has 13 %.
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