The pie charts give information about the proportion males and females in employment in six categories divided into manual and non-manual occupations

The pie charts give information about the proportion males and females in employment in six categories divided into manual and non-manual occupations
The two pie charts provide data about the percentage of
men
and
women
in work in varied six sections split into parts automated and non-automated professions. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that both genders are more specialized in non-automatic jobs.
Thus
,
women
are superior in clerical or related work,
while
men
excell
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excel
at managerial and professional occupations. Craft or similar and general labourers which are manual employment stand at almost the same rate between
women
and
men
. The proportion of
women
make
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up just under one
thrid
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third
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in clerical or related, followed by
manegerial
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managerial
and professional and craft or similar, which amount to 29% and just above a quarter. Other
non manual
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, other manual and general labourers are chosen for work relatively less just under
one tenth
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, 3% and 1%, respectively. Managerial and professional leads the way for
men
in all employment with 36%, followed by other manual jobs and craft or similar, which account for just above a quarter and just under a quarter. Clerical or related and other
non manual
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professions are chosen at the same rate for
men
,
however
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general labourers comprise just 1% of all
employes
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employees
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.
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