You are moving out of your rental apartment. Write a letter to your neighbour to say goodbye. In your letter say 1. when and where do you move? 2. why do you move out? 3. how do you feel about it?

Dear Mr Johnson, I am writing

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letter to inform you about moving out of your rental flat in June24. I will be moving to Hills bury Gardens. As I have been promoted by my employer and they told me to relocate to nearby

office

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areas.

Furthermore

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exact

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date of relocation is not yet confirmed,but

tentively

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tentatively

by 12th of

June

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June,

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this

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year will be

date

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the date

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of relocation.My

office

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timings

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have been changed and now I have to report in

office

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at 8.30 am. It will take one hour to reach

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office

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the office

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from here and the traffic jams are

common

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sight, which can delay my reporting time.

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, I am always remembering my time

spend

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your property. As you take care of us just like your family. I have not faced any issues in

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the past

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two years during my stay here. Hope to meet you in future. Yours Sincerely Justin Waugh

yash334

Jul 8, 2024

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coherence

Ensure that all sentences are grammatically correct and coherent, such as 'moving out of my rental flat' instead of 'moving out of your rental flat.'

task achievement

Provide a clearer explanation or a more detailed reason for moving out to fulfill the task requirements better.

greeting and closing

The closing of the letter is courteous and maintains a polite tone, which is important in a farewell letter.

single idea per paragraph

Each paragraph generally focuses on a single idea, making it easier for the reader to follow.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

150 words

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