The graph shows the amount earned by graduates of different age groups in 2002. It includes those with a degree. Those with a higher degree ( postgraduate) and those with other qualifications. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The visual illustrates the number of incomes in 2002 between 3 categories who are graduate,postgraduate and others
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different ages in every week.The biggest amount of money was approximately 850pond in 36-40 years old in others group.
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there was a boom in other categories in age
36-40 more than 800 ponds
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shooted nearly 750 pond but first degree
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31-35 to 46-50 in the first degree
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41-45 in Highers decreased from 810 to 710 and this
decrease continued to less than 700 in ages 56-60, also
the Highers were the same in age
41-45 to 51-55 but they had an increase in age
56-60 by nearly 800 pond incomes every week.Submitted by TUTOO on
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