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The bar chart shows the percentage of households with cars in a European country between 1971 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the percentage of households with cars in a European country between 1971 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The present bar plot compares information about the proportion of
people
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 who have a
car
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 in a European country from 1971 to 2001. It is obvious, that
people
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 who did not have care reduced slightly, but inhabitants having one and 2 or more had a wavy trend in the period of 30 years.
According to
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 the Graph, in 1971, the
people
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, most of whom did not have a
car
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, lived in Europe because the percentage was 47%;
then
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this
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 chart declined fractionally to 28% in 2001. The chart demonstrates citizens who had one
car
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 were 35% in 1971 after that
this
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 trend touched the lowest point in 1981 at nearly 30%;
moreover
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, in 1991 reached the peak was the same as
people
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 having No
car
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 in the first year;
however
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, the number had roughly 5%
falling
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.
In addition
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,
people
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that
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who
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 had more than 1 care at the start had a lower proportion by approximately 15 per cent. Later
this
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 graph had a maximum in 1981 and 2001, by 38%.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, car with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • households
  • car ownership
  • no car
  • one car
  • two or more cars
  • trend
  • proportion
  • gradual increase
  • significant growth
  • decline
  • substantial
  • rivals
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