The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in four various counties of Europe- Germany, Italy, France and Austria from the year 1995 up to 2005.

The graph below  shows the amount of money spent on books in four various counties of Europe- Germany, Italy, France and Austria from the year 1995 up to 2005.
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book
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books
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in four
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ferries
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countries including Germany, Italy,
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Austria
in ten years between 1995 and 2005. Generally,
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from
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that the amount of
money
on
books
increased gradually over
this
period in all countries.
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, Germany spent the highest Numbers of
money
on
books
, followed by
France
,
Italy
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,
while
Austria
represented the lowest
consumstion
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consumption
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book
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books
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.
Germay
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Germany
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money
spent on
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books
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about 80
dollars
(
millions
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)in 1995,
then
increased by 10% in the following two
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to reach 90
dollars
(
millions
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) in 1999. The Same rate of rose up
also
detected in
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line chart ,but it begins
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30
dollars
(
millions
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) in 1995, and growth of 10% in 1990 to 40
dollars
(
millions
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). After 1990, Germany declined slightly to 85
dollars
(
millions
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),
while
Austria
remained stable
at
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the amount of
money
(40
dollars
millions
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) until 2001. After that, there was a dramatic increase
on
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money
in
Austria
and climbed
into
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70
dollars
(
millions
) in 2005.
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the
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year, German reached
on
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95
dollars
(
millions
)
on
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buying
books
.
On the other hand
, Italy and
France
spent the same amount of
money
on
books
in 1995 (50-55
dollars
millions
) .There was a slow increase
on
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the
money
of
books
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France
,
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70
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in 2001, and continues to
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up to 75
dollars
millions
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To sum up
, the
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words money, france, austria, books, dollars, millions with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • expenditure
  • fluctuations
  • economic factors
  • population changes
  • cultural shifts
  • spending patterns
  • steady growth
  • decline
  • projection
  • implications
  • data reliability
  • comparative analysis
  • highest/lowest expenditure
  • investments in literature
  • consumer behavior
  • market trends
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