Some People say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History.

History

and

Science

and

Technology

are the compulsory subjects that every

students

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study

at primary school or upper stage of the school. There has been a growing argument that some

people

put emphasis on the importance of

History

rather than

Science

and

Technology

but some

other

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claimed

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the opposite thing. From my

personally

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perspective, since there are

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clear reasons why those subjects are applied

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the curriculum all over the over,

both

are equally important for students to

study

.

Firstly

,

history

tells us what our ancestors have experienced in the past, which includes

both

success and failure. Generally speaking, we should not do what is deemed

failure

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in the past.

For example

, we know how cruel

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World War two was by learning

History

at school so

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we have never experienced

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World War three until today. Another example is that we respect

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religion and what each

people

believe because we have learned how religion was formulated and the

history

of fighting

due to

the

difference

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of

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belief.

On the other hand

, some

people

might argue that the past is just past and we have to live now and future so

that

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obtaining knowledge by learning

Science

and

Technology

to create new value

to

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the world would rather be crucial. From

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economic perspective,

Science

and

Technology

is

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fundamental for

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economic development because it boosts

people

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and company’s productivity significantly. As outlined in

this

essay,

both

subjects have

benefit

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to consider. In my opinion and personal experience, I think it would

better

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to

study

both

equally at least at the stage of compulsory education.

Then

, students can choose to

study

deeply whichever they prefer to

study

.