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The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selcting and reporting the main features.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selcting and reporting the main features.
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The given line chart illustrates the average
amount
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ot
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of
carbon
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 dioxide that
relase
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released
 per person into
air
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the air
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 in four different countries United
Kingdom
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,
Sweden
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, Italy
,
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 and
portugal
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Portugal
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 over a period from 1967 to 2007. Units are measured in metric
tonnes
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.
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, It is noticeable that
United
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the United
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Kingdom
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release
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releases
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 the largest
amount
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 of
carbon
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 dioxides, followed by
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sweden
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Sweden
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, Italy,
then
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 Portugal.
Moreover
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, there was a gradual increase
on
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in
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 the
avevage
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average
 of
emissions
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 of
carbon
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 dioxide
on
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in
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 Italy and Portugal.
However
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, decline patterns
detected
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were detected
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 on the
emssion
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emission
emissions
 of
this
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gas
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 in
United
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the United
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.
Kingdom
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, and
Sweden
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. Started with
grow up
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growth
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 trends,
portugel
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Portugal
has
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had
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 the lowest emission of
gas
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 in 1967
by
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apply
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about 1 metric
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tonnes
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tonne
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,
then
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 increased slightly to 3 metric
tonnes
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 in 1987,
continus
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continuously
rose up to 5 metric
tonnes
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 in 1997, after that remained steady at the same
amount
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 unit 2007 (7 metric
tonnes
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). The second smallest average of CO2
emissions
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 was Italy
begining
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beginning
 with more than 4 metric
tonnes
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,
tonnes
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, doubled to 6 metric
tonnes
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 in 1997.
On
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In
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 the following ten
Year
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, there was no change
of
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in
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 CO2
emissions
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.
Then
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 , increased slightly , back stably at 7
meteric
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metric
tonnes
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 in the
last
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 ten years (1997 - 2007) Moving to decline trends,
United
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the United
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kingdom
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Kingdom
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 got the highest
amount
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 of
carbon
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 dioxide,
begins
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beginning
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 at ll metric
tonnes
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.
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AFter
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After
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this
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 year, there was a slow decline
on
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in
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 the
emssions
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emissions
 of
this
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gas
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 to end up with 9 metric
tonnes
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.
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, the Second largest
consumper
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consumer
for
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of
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co2
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CO2
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 produced was
the
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apply
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sweden
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Sweden
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. Initial with more than 8 metric
tones
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tonnes
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,
then
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 Climbed and
reaches
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reached
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 a peak at 10 metric
tonnes
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 in 1977. From 1977 to 2007,
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 the
co2
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CO2
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reduce
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reduced
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 gradually to 7,
then
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 to 5 in
Years
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the Years
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 1987, and 2007 respectively,
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,
United
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the United
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kingdom
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Kingdom
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release
relase
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has
 the highest
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amount
amound
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amount
 of
emissions
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on
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of
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 CO2
gas
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 compared to
other
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the other
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 three countries,
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, carbon, kingdom, sweden, tonnes, emissions, gas, co with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • carbon dioxide emissions
  • average per capita
  • trend
  • increase/decrease
  • compare/contrast
  • period/stable
  • turning point
  • fluctuations
  • environmental policies
  • economic factors
  • technological advancements
  • sustainable practices
  • emission reduction targets
  • climate change
  • fossil fuels
  • renewable energy sources
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