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The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selcting and reporting the main features.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selcting and reporting the main features.
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The given line chart illustrates the average
amount
ot
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of
carbon
 dioxide that
relase
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released
 per person into
air
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the air
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 in four different countries United
Kingdom
,
Sweden
, Italy
,
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 and
portugal
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Portugal
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 over a period from 1967 to 2007. Units are measured in metric
tonnes
.
Overall
, It is noticeable that
United
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the United
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Kingdom
release
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releases
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 the largest
amount
 of
carbon
 dioxides, followed by
sweden
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Sweden
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, Italy,
then
 Portugal.
Moreover
, there was a gradual increase
on
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in
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 the
avevage
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average
 of
emissions
 of
carbon
 dioxide
on
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in
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 Italy and Portugal.
However
, decline patterns
detected
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were detected
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 on the
emssion
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emission
emissions
 of
this
gas
 in
United
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the United
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.
Kingdom
, and
Sweden
. Started with
grow up
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growth
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 trends,
portugel
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Portugal
has
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had
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 the lowest emission of
gas
 in 1967
by
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apply
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about 1 metric
tonnes
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tonne
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,
then
 increased slightly to 3 metric
tonnes
 in 1987,
continus
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continuously
rose up to 5 metric
tonnes
 in 1997, after that remained steady at the same
amount
 unit 2007 (7 metric
tonnes
). The second smallest average of CO2
emissions
 was Italy
begining
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beginning
 with more than 4 metric
tonnes
,
tonnes
, doubled to 6 metric
tonnes
 in 1997.
On
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In
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 the following ten
Year
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Years
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, there was no change
of
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in
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 CO2
emissions
.
Then
 , increased slightly , back stably at 7
meteric
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metric
tonnes
 in the
last
 ten years (1997 - 2007) Moving to decline trends,
United
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the United
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kingdom
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Kingdom
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 got the highest
amount
 of
carbon
 dioxide,
begins
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beginning
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 at ll metric
tonnes
.
AFter
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After
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this
 year, there was a slow decline
on
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in
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 the
emssions
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emissions
 of
this
gas
 to end up with 9 metric
tonnes
.
Furthermore
, the Second largest
consumper
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consumer
for
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of
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co2
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CO2
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 produced was
the
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apply
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sweden
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Sweden
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. Initial with more than 8 metric
tones
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tonnes
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,
then
 Climbed and
reaches
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reached
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 a peak at 10 metric
tonnes
 in 1977. From 1977 to 2007,
It is clear that
 the
co2
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CO2
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reduce
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reduced
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 gradually to 7,
then
 to 5 in
Years
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the Years
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 1987, and 2007 respectively,
To sum up
,
United
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the United
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kingdom
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Kingdom
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release
relase
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has
 the highest
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amount
amound
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amount
 of
emissions
on
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of
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 CO2
gas
 compared to
other
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the other
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 three countries,
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, carbon, kingdom, sweden, tonnes, emissions, gas, co with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • carbon dioxide emissions
  • average per capita
  • trend
  • increase/decrease
  • compare/contrast
  • period/stable
  • turning point
  • fluctuations
  • environmental policies
  • economic factors
  • technological advancements
  • sustainable practices
  • emission reduction targets
  • climate change
  • fossil fuels
  • renewable energy sources
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