The line graph illustrates the production level of the three main fuels in the United Kindom (petroleum, coal, natural gas) in 19 years from 1981 to 2000.

The line graph illustrates the production level of the three main fuels in the United Kindom (petroleum, coal, natural gas) in 19 years from 1981 to 2000.
The given Chart provides an about the
production
of three types of
energy
fuels including coal, natural
Gas
, and petroleum in the UK throughout a period between 1981 and 2000.Units are measured by millions of
tonnes
.
Overall
, the largest
production
level
was petroleum
energy
among all types of
energy
.
Moreover
, petrol
energy
and natural
gas
show an upward trend over
this
period.
while
,
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coal had a downward trend.
Petroluem
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Petroleum
energy
commenced at 70
million
tonnes
in 1981,
then
increased dramatically to 140
million
tonnes
in1983. After that, there was no change in the
production
until 1987.
Then
,declined on
this
type of
energy
to 100 in 1991. Between 1991 and 2000, the
production
of petroleum
energy
increased gradually to 140
million
tons throughout the
last
six years.
Moreover
, the natural
gas
level
initialed
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at 40
million
tonnes
,
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and remained steady at the same target in the year 1991.
Following
this
, a line of up line was observed at the natural
gas
level
from 80 to 1000
million
tonnes
in the two years 1996, and 2000 respectively. Regarding
to
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coal
production
, it started at around 80
million
tonnes
and stayed without any change before dropping to half (40
million
tonnes
) in 1983. In the following years, a gradual decline was detected in the
energy
level
of coal.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "moreover".
Vocabulary: Replace the words production, energy, gas, tonnes, level, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.

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