The line graph illustrates the production level of the three main fuels in the United Kindom (petroleum, coal, natural gas) in 19 years from 1981 to 2000.
The given Chart provides an about the
production
of three types of energy
fuels including coal, natural Gas
, and petroleum in the UK throughout a period between 1981 and 2000.Units are measured by millions of tonnes
.Overall
, the largest production
level
was petroleum energy
among all types of energy
. Moreover
, petrol energy
and natural gas
show an upward trend over this
period. while
,
coal had a downward trend.
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Petroluem
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Petroleum
energy
commenced at 70 million
tonnes
in 1981, then
increased dramatically to 140 million
tonnes
in1983. After that, there was no change in the production
until 1987. Then
,declined on this
type of energy
to 100 in 1991. Between 1991 and 2000, the production
of petroleum energy
increased gradually to 140 million
tons throughout the last
six years.
Moreover
, the natural gas
level
initialed
at 40 Change the spelling
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million
tonnes
,
and remained steady at the same target in the year 1991. Remove the comma
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Following
this
, a line of up line was observed at the natural gas
level
from 80 to 1000 million
tonnes
in the two years 1996, and 2000 respectively.
Regarding to
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production
, it started at around 80 million
tonnes
and stayed without any change before dropping to half (40 million
tonnes
) in 1983. In the following years, a gradual decline was detected in the energy
level
of coal.Submitted by MM2
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