Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports. Others, however, believe that everyone should have the freedom to choose whatever sports activities they like. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are some people who think that

governments

have to

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the dangerous kinds of sports. Simultaneously others

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that the possibility of free choice is the basic right of people.

Firstly

, I want to discuss the side of those who think that it's

necessity

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for legislative

sport

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prohibition by

governments

. The main reason for

such

prohibition could be the cost of medical treatment

of

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the dangerous

sport

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consequences. It may be

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tough burden on the health system, especially in countries that have

a

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compulsory health insurance.

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, in the countries with

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private

insurance

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this

burden falls on the family.

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, Michael Schumacher,

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became

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after

skiing

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accident. He was unconscious

several

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years in his house

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became the hospital. But his family had

a

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money for

such

treatment. And if they hadn't had? Many families sailed

there

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cars and houses

for paying

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medical bills.

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,

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freedom of choice is one of the basic statuses of the democratic state law. So we can't ask the

governments

to change the essential status of their law. I suppose that they can limit the age of dangerous

sport

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participation, or convey all the responsibility for consequences to the people who are doing

this

kind of

sports

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. In my humble opinion, the

governments

can't

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their citizens

to participate

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from participating

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in unsafe

sport

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activities, but they can increase

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awareness about the consequences of

such

sports,

rise

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the

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insurance, and concern about special rehabilitation programmes.