Food travels thousands of miles from farms to consumers. some people believe we should buy food from local farmer to protect the environment and support local businesses. do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
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Nowadays, under the development of delivery
system
, local specialities are able to be shipped to everywhere just by an online order. Fix the agreement mistake
systems
Therefore
, tons of plastic for item's packings
are released to harm our environment. I firmly believe that buying Change noun form
items
food
directly from local farmer
would bring many positive impacts to encourage the indigenous economy.
It is evident that the demand Fix the agreement mistake
farmers
of
Change preposition
for
food
delivery and cargo is more and more higher for the last
ten years. It also
means that we are wasting a lot of money for
plastic Change preposition
on
packings
, transportation fuel, Fix the agreement mistake
packing
even
the preservative Correct word choice
and even
subtains
. Correct your spelling
sustains
As a result
, our environment has been gradually destroyed by the big
amount of disintegrated garbage, Correct word choice
large
the
air pollution, and our health has been endangered by eating too much of Correct article usage
apply
chemiscal
preservatives. Correct your spelling
chemical
For instance
, annually there is about 500 million tons of US cherry are shipped to Vietnam, estimated about 10 tons of packing items and 50 litters of chemiscal
Correct your spelling
chemical
chemicals
subtains
are needed to use. Those expenses are much Correct your spelling
sustains
more
higher than local Change the word
apply
farmer
's benefit
.
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benefits
Instead
of food
travelling to customers, why not customers coming to local food
? Obviously, this
point would bring more directly
Change the word
direct
benefit
for local people. Not only increasing income for Correct subject-verb agreement
benefits
food
industry but Add an article
the food
also
creat
more jobs for tourism. Correct your spelling
create
For example
, the new trend of homestay tour
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tours
that make
travellers have chance to come and stay with Verb problem
gives
the
friendly Correct article usage
apply
farmer
family
, to experience Fix the agreement mistake
families
to cook
local Change the verb form
cooking
food
, to taste fresh fruits from local gardens and learn
more about local culture. In Fix the infinitive
to learn
this
way, local farmer
and Fix the agreement mistake
farmers
comsumers
are happy.
In conclusion, I support that we should experience the local Correct your spelling
consumers
consumer
food
at the place where it comes from. It is the best way to support the local economy and save our environment.Submitted by minhchau8487 on
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