The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given map illustrates the
town
Use synonyms
area
of Garlsdon where a novel Use synonyms
supermarket
is planned, it proposed two suitable sites for the Use synonyms
supermarket
construction planning namely S1 and S2. Use synonyms
Overall
, it can be seen that both sites are Linking Words
accesible
by train and main roads.
Correct your spelling
accessible
To begin
with, looking at the Linking Words
first
possible Use synonyms
site
, it is located in the Use synonyms
north west
of the Correct your spelling
northwest
area
, making it close to two areas which are Hindon that only 12 km far from it, and Garlsdon. It is easy for communities to travel to the other areas by train and through main roads. Use synonyms
Additionally
, there is a housing Linking Words
area
in the north of the Use synonyms
town
that Use synonyms
close
to the Add a missing verb
is close
first
planned Use synonyms
supermarket
.
Moving to the second suitable Use synonyms
site
. Use synonyms
In contrast
to the Linking Words
first
Use synonyms
site
Use synonyms
that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
placed
in the rural Verb problem
located
area
, it is situated in the center of the Use synonyms
town
, which Use synonyms
allow
residents to access many different ways to reach another Correct subject-verb agreement
allows
town
namely Bransdon and Cransdon Use synonyms
that
calculated 16 km and 25 km away respectively. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Smiliarly
to the Correct your spelling
Similarly
first
Use synonyms
supermarket
planned point, it has access to Use synonyms
train
and main roads that facilitate the locals for commuting. Correct article usage
the train
Moreover
, compared with the Linking Words
first
Use synonyms
site
, Use synonyms
this
future Linking Words
supermarket
will be placed even nearer to the housing Use synonyms
area
which is located in the south of it.Use synonyms
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, area, supermarket, first, site with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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