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The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selcting and reporting the main features.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selcting and reporting the main features.
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The line graph gives information about average carbon dioxide
emissions
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 per
person
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 in five big countries in Europe for a 50-year
period
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 of time from 1967 to 2007.
Overall
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, the United Kingdom has a slightly decreasing
trend
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 throughout the
period
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.
Also
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, Sweden shows an increasing
trend
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 at the start of the
period
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,
then
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 a drop after that. Meanwhile, Italy and Portugal have an increasing
trend
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 from
start
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the start
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 to the end of the
period
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. In 1967, the United Kingdom had the highest average of CO2 at almost 11
emissions
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 per
person
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 and remained at the top but with a slight decrease, reaching the lowest record of nearly 9
emissions
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 per
person
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 by 2007.
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, Sweden at the start of the
period
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 had almost 9
emissions
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 per
person
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,
then
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 jumped to between 10 and 11
emissions
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 per
person
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. After that, Sweden dramatically dropped and reached the lowest number among all countries,
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 Portugal, at 5
emissions
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 per
person
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 in 2007. Italy and Portugal at the start of the
period
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 had almost 4 and nearly 2, respectively. By 2007, Italy showed an increasing
trend
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, reaching almost 8
emissions
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 per
person
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 and becoming the second highest country in terms of average CO2
emissions
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. Meanwhile, Portugal had an increasing
trend
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 and reached its highest record at 5
emissions
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 per
person
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 in 2007.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words emissions, person, period, trend with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • carbon dioxide emissions
  • average per capita
  • trend
  • increase/decrease
  • compare/contrast
  • period/stable
  • turning point
  • fluctuations
  • environmental policies
  • economic factors
  • technological advancements
  • sustainable practices
  • emission reduction targets
  • climate change
  • fossil fuels
  • renewable energy sources
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