Nowadays, more and more older people who need employment compete with the younger people for the same job. What problem this causes? What are solution?

Issues related to job competition in two different generations are frequently discussed these days. It is true that the number of

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elderly

individuals looking for

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similar position as younger

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is

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increasing

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present day. In the following paragraph, both

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causes and

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will be critically examined. On the one hand, there are a number of problems associated with

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trend. The principal cause is that the employment

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for young people will be dropped,

espeacially

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especially

for fresh graduates.

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, opening positions for younger generations are able to be snatched by seniors leading to

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unemployment

problems.

As a consequence

, many juniors could not

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afford

numerous benefits

such

as public funds or company insurance resulting in negative

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issues.

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, there is

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research from Chulalongkorn University has shown that

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rate

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directly

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by the employment rate. On the other

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, there are potential ways to tackle these situations or at least reduce the effects. The primary method is

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government

should provide proper strategies to solve

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circumstance

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.

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means that policies or regulations about aged people should be released including pension, retirement benefits and health care services.

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,

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should

also

carefully invest in education and training programs for

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amateur

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.

Consequently

,

this

can improve their competitiveness and employability in

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market. All things considered, It can be concluded that youth unemployment, criminal rate, and work environments are the major effects of the increasing competition between young

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and

old generation

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workers.

Therefore

,

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of

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or any related agencies should find the right balance before making

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as pivotal determination.