The chart below show the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant
There are numerous types of meals consumed in the USA. In
these meal
contain many ingredients Change the determiner
this meal
these meals
such
as sodium
, saturated fats
and added sugars. These graphs show the amount
of these three nutrients in between the four times of eating.
Let's start with sodium
, in breakfast the amount
of sodium
intake is 14%, same with the snacks
eaten which
the Correct your spelling
with
amount
of sodium
is
14%. The most Wrong verb form
being
amount
of sodium
consumed is at dinner
at 43%, while
the second most amount
of sodium
consumed is at lunch at 29%. Next,
there is
Saturated Change the verb form
are
fats
. Saturated fats
is
mostly consumed at Change the verb form
are
dinner
at
37% of it consumed Change preposition
with
at
there. Change preposition
apply
Then
comes at
lunch and Change preposition
apply
dinner
where they are at 26% and 16% respectively and 21% for snacks
. Moreover
, for Added sugars
the Add a comma
sugars,
amount
of sugars consumed the most is at snacks
at a whopping 42%. Which belittles the amount
of sodium
or saturated fats
consumed on
Change preposition
in
snacks
. To continue, there are 16% for breakfast, 19% for lunch and 23% for dinner
.
To summarize the amount
of Sodium
consumed is
Unnecessary verb
apply
peak
during Fix the agreement mistake
peaks
dinner
same as the amount
of saturated fat which is the most at dinner
, while
the added sugar is mostly taken during snacks
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