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The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given chart and table indicate the amount of money from one country's exports in many different categories and the
change
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 in the percentage in each category of exports between 2015 and 2016 respectively.
Overall
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, the
export
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 earnings of petroleum products were the highest but the percentage
change
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 of textiles was the biggest from 2015 to 2016. The petroleum products and engineered goods had
export
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 earnings which increased slightly from 2015 to 2016, which were approximately 60$ billion.
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, their percentage
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 was 3 and 8,5 per
cent
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 respectively.
In contrast
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, gems and jewellery decreased the
export
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 making, which was above 40$ billion and the difference was 5,18 per
cent
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. The
export
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 earnings which did not have a big difference and were above 30$ billion was the agricultural product.
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, it made up an 0,8 per
cent
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change
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 in value.
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, textiles had a remarkable rise, which was from about 25 to 32 per
cent
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 and stayed at a 15,24 per
cent
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change
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 in value

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words change, export, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • categories
  • percentage change
  • value
  • machinery
  • textiles
  • agricultural products
  • raw materials
  • increase
  • decrease
  • trend
  • sector
  • growth
  • decline
  • economic factors
  • market demand
  • trade policies
  • contribution
  • anomalies
  • unexpected findings
  • implications
  • economy
  • trade negotiations
  • export strategies
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