The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given chart and table indicate the amount of money from one country's exports in many different categories and the
change
in the percentage in each category of exports between 2015 and 2016 respectively.
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earnings of petroleum products were the highest but the percentage Use synonyms
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of textiles was the biggest from 2015 to 2016.
The petroleum products and engineered goods had Use synonyms
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earnings which increased slightly from 2015 to 2016, which were approximately 60$ billion. Use synonyms
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, gems and jewellery decreased the Linking Words
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making, which was above 40$ billion and the difference was 5,18 per Use synonyms
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earnings which did not have a big difference and were above 30$ billion was the agricultural product. Use synonyms
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, it made up an 0,8 per Linking Words
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, textiles had a remarkable rise, which was from about 25 to 32 per Linking Words
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