the chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage changes in each caterogry of exports in 2016 compared 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reproting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart shows the difference in
amount
of one country's exports in different Add an article
the amount
kind
of categories in 2015 and 2016. There is Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
also
a information
that shows the percentage difference in every Remove the article
information
a piece of information
categories
of exports in 2016 compared to 2015.
Most export Change to a singular noun
category
earnings
come from petroleum products
in both years. On the other hand
, textiles
is
always the lowest in all years. The highest amount of export Change the verb form
are
earnings
in 2015 and 2016 is about $60 billions
which is petroleum Change to singular
billion
products
. Next,
the second highest is the
engineered goods where in 2016 it Correct article usage
apply
gave
Verb problem
had
higher
impact on money from the largest Correct article usage
a higher
earnings
. To add it up, the two smallest earnings
have about the same earnings
in 2016, while
in 2015 it have
a very huge gap. Agricultural Change the verb form
has
products
only have
a Wrong verb form
had
little
increase, Correct word choice
small
while
textiles
have
a huge increase causing both of the categories to be about the same in 2016. In the middle of it, there Wrong verb form
had
is
gems and Correct subject-verb agreement
are
jewellry
which donates about $40 Correct your spelling
jewellery
billions
in 2015 and 2016.
The highest percentage change in values is for Change to singular
billion
textiles
where
Correct word choice
which
it
increases by 15.24% and the lowest is Correct pronoun usage
apply
agricultural
Change preposition
for agricultural
products
which decreases
by 5.18%. Change the verb form
decrease
However
, the least money that the country get
is from Change the verb form
gets
textiles
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words earnings, products, textiles with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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