The chart below shows the total number of hours per month from 1980 to 2015 that people in the USA used modern technology divided into four categories. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graph illustrates the monthly hours spent by people in the USA using modern technology from 2000 to 2015.
Overall
, there was a significant increase in the usage
of phones, while
the use of radios saw a substantial decline over the period.
To begin
with, it is clear that
the usage
of phones increased dramatically. In 2000, the average time spent on phones was relatively low. However
, over the next 15 years, there was a steady and substantial rise, with phone usage
increasing by 80%.
Moving ahead, the use of radios showed the opposite trend. In 2000, radio usage
was quite high, but it decreased steadily over the years. By 2015, the time spent on radios had dropped by 75%.
Hence
, the overall
usage
of modern technology increased significantly from 2000 to 2015, with phone usage
rising sharply and radio usage
declining considerably.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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