Some children spend most of their free time taking part in clubs and other planned activities. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In today's world, so many

classes

are available for

children

and

kids

in order to spend time and learn something. The most important and crucial part of these activities is their content and what is

tought

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thought

in

these kind

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of clubs .So they may have some benefits, but can still damage

children

in some ways. In

this

essay , I will consider both views and give my opinion.

Children

love to play, and they learn so many new lessons by playing games especially those that are involved with interaction with other

kids

.

when

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parents decide to take their loved ones to attend

in

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several

classes

in order to fill their free time ,

children

will get tired soon and their energy reduces .

Consequently

,

kids

miss the opportunity to play and learn

alongside

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being entertained.

Moreover

, when they become adults, they may feel something is missing in their soul and

that is

the lack from their childhood. No matter how

succesful

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successful

they get

then

, that feeling will not go away easily. As we can see these days in our surrounding ones who have many regrets about their past and they just want their

children

to

do

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not end up like them.

On the other hand

, young people gain knowledge and experience by taking part in some

classes

.

For instance

, there are some special

classes

for

children

which help them find their talent and passion. So, parents will help their

children

better in their future life and

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their dreams .

Therefore

,

kids

will be prepared for their future and will be less

confuse

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about their will.

For example

, they will not have to

chose

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different things and carriers to see which one they are good at as they already have found it.

To sum up

, pre-planned activities and

classes

can damage the childhood of

kids

if they are too much and exhausting .And if not so, those clubs would be very useful for them and their future.