The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The shown diagram shows how the process of making

sugar

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from

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cane is carried out in a factory, which

involues

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involves

the use of various equipment . It is clear

from

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that, the process has multiple different stages

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starting

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staring

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starting

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from growing and ending with drying and cooling

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with, one can see that the first

stages

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is

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cane is planted and nurtured for 12 to 18 months, after which the stalks are harvested. Harvesting is carried out either by a reaper or using a sickle. After that, a crusher

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the

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cane

juice

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out of the

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tree trunk

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, after which the

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purifying

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juice

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using a limestone filter. The subsequent step

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involves

evaporation, the resulting

juice

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is heated in a kiln become syrup. Following that, syrup

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in a centrifuge

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to

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separating

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crystals from

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the syrup

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.

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, the

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is dried and cooled before being packed and shipped to consumption sites.