The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The diagram process below displays the way sugar is produced
Firstly
, this
manufacture begins with a herb called a
sugarcane. It grows from one to one and a half years. Remove the article
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Then
, the farmers collect these sugarcanes. After that, these plants be
crushed and transformed into Wrong verb form
are
a
juice. Correct article usage
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This
natural spirit is dirty enough to make it unhealthy, so it goes through a limestone filter.
With the help of a heater, this
clear liquid becomes a syrup. Tiny sugar-crystals
, inside of that sirup, Correct your spelling
sugar crystals
is
separated from an actual substance. Correct subject-verb agreement
are
Finally
, after all of this
procedure, these saccharose molecules get dried and cooled down. This
results in receiving a
sweet sand.
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Overall
, there are seven steps, which are growing, harvesting, crushing, purifying juice, evaporating, separating sugar crystals from syrup, drying and cooling. There are some equipment, which are crusher, limestone filter, evaporator and
etc. There is only one resource, which is sugarcane.Correct word choice
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